That evening, when the joy in my eight-year-old son’s eyes went out, I still did not understand that in a few days the door of my house would be locked to everyone.
It was Tuesday, seven in the evening. In the large living room of my husband’s parents’ house, the last rays of the sun entered through the windows. Brenda was drinking wine, Kylie was looking at something on her phone, and Leo stood in the corner, turning a small folded piece of paper in his hands. Our plan for our weekend outing was written on it.
“Mother Brenda, may I borrow your old tent?” he asked carefully. “I’m going into the forest with Dad and we’ll need it for only two nights.”
Brenda put the glass on the table. The glass clinked sharply against the wooden surface.
“My tent?” she repeated.
“If it’s possible,” Leo nodded.
Brenda looked at me and got a smile as if she had heard something funny.
“Buy your own. If your mother can have a sixty-thousand-dollar pool built, she can also buy one tent. We are not a charity organization.”
Silence fell over the room.
The paper slipped from Leo’s hand. The little expectation on his face, which he had tried to preserve all day, disappeared. I felt a dry heaviness in my throat, but I answered Brenda nothing.
“Let’s go, Leo,” was all I told him.
“Mom, I didn’t ask for money…”
“I know, my dear.”
On Wednesday morning, we returned to our house. The house stood on the edge of the city, with a large yard and a saltwater pool that Daniel and I had built with years of savings. For three years Brenda and Kylie had used it as their own resort club. They knew the code. They brought guests. They held noisy parties. Sometimes I woke up in the morning and found strangers’ shoes in the yard.
That same evening Daniel looked at the gate camera recording.
“They came in again,” he said. “On Saturday evening.”
“Without asking?”
“There were twelve cars.”
Sunday, six in the evening. As soon as I entered the backyard, I heard a terrible metallic screeching. The pool water was cloudy. Crushed beer cans floated on it, food scraps lay on the stones, and shards of broken glass glittered at my feet.
There was smoke around the filtration system. The drains, clogged with trash, had been running the pump dry for twenty-four hours. The engine was heating up as if it might explode at any moment.
Daniel rushed forward.
“I’m going to Brenda.”
“No,” I grabbed him by the wrist. “Not yet.”
On the table, beside an empty wine bottle, lay Brenda’s expensive glasses. The golden frame shone coldly in the sunset.
I took out my phone and filmed everything: the dirty water, the cans, the scraps, the glass, the overflowing filters, the smoky pump, and finally—the glasses beside the bottle.
That night I locked myself in my study. First I canceled Brenda’s and Kylie’s phone bills. Then the insurance for their cars. Finally, I deleted the gate codes.
The repair company’s estimate was eighteen thousand four hundred fifty dollars.
Daniel stopped at the door.
“Are you sure?”
“For the first time, I am sure.”
It was eleven fifty-nine at night when I sent the damage bill to their email. In the morning, in the kitchen, my phone vibrated constantly. Brenda’s name appeared on the screen, although her number had already been disconnected.
Daniel picked up the phone, looked at me, and silently handed it to me. The call came in again. This time my finger itself moved toward the answer button…
“What are you doing?” Daniel asked me.
“I’m answering.”
I turned on the call. For several seconds, only heavy breathing could be heard.
“Mariana, what did you do?” Brenda was shouting. “My phone doesn’t work!”
“Because I am no longer paying.”
“You paid for three years!”
“For three years you used my pool without permission.”
Kylie’s voice joined in:
“This is a family matter. Sending a bill is a threat.”
“I sent the bill together with the evidence.”
Daniel stood beside me. The coffee cup in his hand was trembling.
“Did you damage the pool?” he asked.
Brenda fell silent.
Then she said quietly:
“Why are you giving a children’s party such importance?”
“Because the pump almost burned out,” I answered. “And I found your glasses there.”
“Someone might have taken the glasses.”
“I also have the cameras.”
Her breath caught. Then Brenda shouted at me that I was splitting up the family and that Daniel had to make a choice.
I ended the call.
An hour later a lawyer called me. He told me that they wanted to file a complaint against me, as if they had verbal consent to use the pool.
“Then there is still one thing they do not know,” I told him.
“What?”
“Every party is on the cameras. And the last recording is not only about the pool…”
At that very moment the doorbell rang. A man dressed in a police uniform appeared on the screen…
Two police officers stood in front of the door. It was Friday, nine in the morning. Rain struck the windows, and my palms were so cold as if I were holding them in snow.
“Mrs. Mariana, a complaint has been filed concerning your house,” the senior police officer said. “Brenda and Kylie claim that you illegally used their belongings and damaged their personal property in the pool.”
Daniel laughed bitterly.
“Their belongings? This is our pool.”
The police officer opened a bag.
“Their statement says that the glasses were stolen from them and then deliberately damaged.”
I put the laptop on the table.
“I have a recording.”
Only the sound of the computer fan could be heard in the room. I played the camera video. Saturday night appeared on the screen: Brenda opened the gate with the code, while Kylie let six people in behind her. Then Brenda herself threw garbage bags into the pool. Kylie laughingly poured a drink into the filter opening.
In the video Brenda said:
“Tomorrow Mariana will come back and we’ll blame everything on us? No, it’s better for her to think the children ruined it.”
The police officer stopped the video.
For the first time I saw Brenda’s face changed by fear.
“This is edited,” she whispered.
“Shall I show the next recording too?” I asked.
Kylie took a step back.
In the second recording she was sending Daniel a message: “If Mariana stops paying, you will no longer be able to endure staying in the family.” Then Brenda told her that leaving my house and selling the pool was our only solution.
Daniel looked at the screen and his face turned pale.
“Did you know this?” I asked.
“No,” he said. “I swear, I didn’t know.”
The police officer requested a copy of the video. I handed him the memory card. That same day we went to the lawyer’s office. I arranged the repair bill, the cameras, the payment history, and the gate recordings in one folder. I put a small bag sewn from green fabric into the folder—the one in which I had kept the compass Leo was taking to the forest.
The lawyer looked through the documents.
“You paid their phone and insurance for three years?”
“For peace in the family.”
“And now they claim that this was an obligation.”
“The truth was not an obligation. I was simply taking responsibility for them.”
In the evening Brenda called Daniel. He put the call on speaker.
“Son, Mariana is lying to you. Not everything can be seen in the cameras.”
“I saw it, Mom.”
“You are my son!”
Daniel lowered his eyes.
“That is exactly why it hurts the most.”
That night the police sent Brenda and Kylie a letter: an investigation was beginning for making a false statement, property damage, and illegal entry. I thought the hardest part was already behind us.
But the next morning a call came from the bank. Someone had requested cancellation of the pool insurance in my name and then submitted an application for a large loan.
The operator told me in a low voice:
“Madam, a copy of your signature is attached to the application. And this signature has been stolen by one person in your family…”
He did not say the name. But I already understood whom he was talking about…
ბრენდა საკუთარ ხმას პირველად მოუსმენს…
ფინალში ყველაფერი იმაზე მეტად შემოტრიალდება, ვიდრე წარმოგიდგენიათ. ერთი ჩანაწერი მათივე სიტყვებს დაუბრუნებს.
„ახლა პასუხი არაა.“
ბრენდა პირველად გაჩუმდა.
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