As soon as my husband entered the hospital room, he told me that my awakening was the greatest disappointment for him.
Five minutes earlier, Mauricio Herrera had been holding my hand with the doctors and nurses and repeating in a tearful voice:
“She is my life. I cannot live without her.”
Chief Doctor Salgado, the director of this private clinic, was patting him on the shoulder.
“The operation went brilliantly, Mauricio. You kept her alive.”
Everyone looked shaken.
Everyone except me.
I, Valeria Mendes, was thirty-nine years old and had turned my father’s small workshop into a large company over almost twenty years. My enterprise manufactured monitors and medical equipment for hospitals. We had contracts with half the clinics in the country.
Mauricio was a surgeon. We had married four years earlier. He seemed attentive, careful, sometimes even excessively caring. He checked my medicines himself, took the car to the service center himself, and always told me that I should not drive when tired.
Therefore, when I opened my eyes and saw no relief on his face, ice passed through my heart.
At that very moment the doctors left.
Mauricio let go of my hand as if it were a dirty object.
“You turned out to be stronger than I thought,” he whispered.
I wanted to speak, but only rough air came from my throat.
He bent over my bed.
“Rest. Let us see how much longer your luck will last.”
The door slammed.
My body hurt, but more frightening than this pain was one question: why had my husband been afraid of my awakening?
Three nights earlier I was returning home from a business dinner. Before I started the car, Mauricio called me.
“I checked the car, the brakes are excellent,” he told me. “Take the old road; there is less traffic there.”
I believed him.
On the descent before the turn, I pressed the brake.
The pedal went down to the floor.
I pressed it again.
The car went faster.
The last thing I remembered was the wall, my scream, and the sound of shattered metal.
And now I lay alone in the room, while the green light of the monitor flickered on the wall.
A few minutes later the door opened again. I immediately closed my eyes.
Mauricio entered. Camila was with him, a young nurse who worked beside him almost all the time.
“Your performance was excellent,” Camila giggled quietly. “Everyone thinks you are the husband of the year.”
Mauricio laughed briefly.
“I had to behave that way. After the brakes were damaged, everyone had to be convinced that I was doing everything to save her.”
My breath caught.
Camila bent over the bed.
“What are you going to do now?”
Silence fell for several seconds. Then Mauricio lightly tapped the infusion tube with his finger.
“Tonight I will inject her with a muscle relaxant. Given her injuries, no one will suspect anything if her heart stops.”
“And then?”
“Then her shares, accounts, and everything she has will pass to me.”
Under the bed, I clenched my fingers so tightly that my nails dug into my skin.
Mauricio looked at me once more.
“Tomorrow morning I will be much more convincing as a widower than as a frightened husband.”
Their footsteps moved toward the door.
My eyes were still closed, but now fear was no longer alone. Anger stood beside it.
As soon as the door closed, I searched under the pillow with my palm for something that could help me escape this place. My fingers touched a small, hard object. It was a phone.
I knew who could have left it.
But before I could turn on the screen, I heard Mauricio’s voice outside the door again:
“We go in at ten. This time she really will not wake up…”
I turned on the phone under the pillow and called Rafael Torres, the head of security at my company.
“Mrs. Mendes?”
“Mauricio caused the accident. He is planning to kill me tonight.”
Rafael asked no unnecessary questions.
“I will be with you in ten minutes.”
Fifteen minutes later Rafael, who had entered in technical staff clothing, seated me in a chair and moved me to a secret spare room. My lawyer Lucia Ortega and the prosecutor’s investigator Santiago Robles were waiting for us there.
“We need evidence,” Santiago told me.
On the phone, we opened access to the car’s protected storage. In the recording made before the accident, Mauricio said:
“I personally checked the brakes. Take the old road.”
Then my scream was heard.
Lucia lowered her eyes.
“Now no one will save him.”
But I did not want merely to hear this. I wanted him to come into that room himself and finish with his own hands what he had begun.
Rafael activated the backup channel of the clinic’s surveillance system. We laid a medical mannequin on my bed and connected an infusion tube to it.
At ten o’clock at night Mauricio appeared on the screen. He was holding a syringe.
“Wait,” Santiago said quietly. “Let him enter completely first.”
The door opened. Mauricio locked the room, went to the bed, and bent toward the mannequin’s face.
At that moment a strange sound came from behind the wall…
Mauricio quickly raised his head. Only the even beeping of the machines could be heard in the room. He pulled aside the curtain, looked under the bed, and turned back to the mannequin.
My hands were trembling in front of the screen. My ribs hurt with every breath, but I could not take my eyes off it.
“Now,” I whispered. “Now he must see that he is not alone.”
Santiago said on the radio:
“Not yet. Let him speak himself.”
Mauricio brought the syringe close to the infusion tube.
“A few minutes and everything will be over,” he told the body lying on the bed. “You will never wake me at night again, you will never check where I am going and whom I am meeting again.”
The mannequin, of course, remained silent.
Mauricio smiled bitterly.
“You loved my money more than you loved yourself. I understand that only now.”
At that moment Lucia squeezed my hand. There were tears on her face, but her voice was firm.
“Valeria, you must know: he did not do this only because of the money.”
“What do you mean?”
Lucia opened the car examination document on the table.
“A week before the accident Mauricio secretly pledged some of your company’s shares. He had debts. Then he discovered that you were planning to change your will.”
I froze.
“The will?”
“You were going to leave the controlling package and the trust fund to your mother, Elena. Mauricio would receive nothing.”
Santiago opened another window on the screen. The clinic pharmacy could be seen. Mauricio was taking a vial of a special medicine there and hiding it in his pocket.
“This recording has been officially saved,” he said. “But now we are missing the main evidence.”
Mauricio took the syringe toward the tube.
“Tonight my life begins,” he muttered.
This time Santiago ordered over the radio:
“Turn on the sound.”
Rafael pressed one button. My voice came from a hidden speaker in the room:
“No, Mauricio. Your life ends today.”
Mauricio stepped back. The syringe fell from his hand and rolled across the floor.
The door beside the wall opened. I was sitting in a wheelchair, Lucia behind me, while Santiago stood holding a warrant.
“This is impossible,” Mauricio rasped.
“You knew better than anyone that the cameras installed in my company’s clinics also record audio,” I told him. “You were simply sure that I would never wake up again.”
At that very moment Camila rushed in.
“Mauricio, what are you doing?”
“Shut up!” he shouted at her.
Santiago picked up the syringe with a glove.
“You are both under arrest for attempted intentional murder. Damage to the car, theft, and financial fraud will also be added.”
Mauricio looked toward me.
“Valeria, listen to me. I will explain everything.”
“You have already explained everything to yourself,” I replied. “The camera only gave us a way for me to hear it too.”
When the police put handcuffs on him, his face for the first time resembled what I had been feeling for three days.
But Santiago’s phone rang. He listened, lost color, and turned toward me.
“Mrs. Mendes, this was only the beginning. An order to transfer money from your accounts has already been executed, and you are not the signatory. Someone used your digital signature.”
Mauricio lowered his head, but the corner of his lips smiled almost imperceptibly.
“You still have not understood whom you are dealing with,” he said.
And that night the worst news was still waiting for me outside the clinic.
მავრიკიომ საკუთარი ხმა მოისმინა და პირველად დადუმდა…
მეგონა, რომ სიმართლის გამხელით ყველაფერი დასრულდებოდა. მაგრამ ყველაზე მძიმე ბრძოლა მაშინ დაიწყო, როცა მისი არჩევანის შედეგები ჩემამდე მოვიდა.
„ერთი შეცდომა მუხრუჭებს არ ჭრის.“
დარბაზში სრული სიჩუმე ჩამოწვა.
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