That morning, when I picked up my daughter from school, she told me that she had stopped talking to her father about the pain because he never believed her.
Maya sat in the back seat of the car with both hands wrapped around her stomach. The March sunlight coming through the window fell on her face, but she was so pale that it seemed even the light could not reach her skin.
“Mom, don’t tell Dad that it hurts again,” she whispered.
I gripped the steering wheel so tightly that my fingers turned white.
“Why shouldn’t I tell him?”
Maya did not answer immediately. The small copper moon-shaped pendant hanging from her bag touched the glass and jingled at every turn. That sound had always seemed cheerful to me. That day it sounded like the heartbeat of someone sick.
“He’ll say I’m making it up,” she said at last. “As always.”
It was ten in the morning in the hospital reception area. The plastic chairs were cold, the floor smelled sharply of disinfectant, and Maya sat beside me, rubbing her knees with her palms.
“How long has your stomach been hurting?” the receptionist asked.
“Almost a month,” I answered.
Maya lowered her eyes.
“Sometimes even longer.”
Those words seemed to change the air in the room. The receptionist stopped her pen and called us into the doctor’s office.
Doctor Levan was not young, but his movements were quick and precise. He measured Maya’s blood pressure, carefully examined her abdomen, and asked several times whether she had dizziness, nausea, or headaches.
“Does anyone else at home have similar complaints?” he asked.
“I don’t know,” I said. “My head has been hurting often lately, but I blamed it on tiredness.”
The doctor looked at Maya.
“Are you worse in the morning?”
“Yes.”
“When you are at home?”
Maya slowly nodded.
Levan set the paper aside and ordered the nurse to perform blood and urine tests and an urgent examination of her abdomen.
“Is it something serious?” I asked.
“We don’t have the results yet. But the child’s condition no longer looks like just ‘teenage stress.’”
At those words, the anger I had been carrying for almost a month caught in my throat.
Maya was taken into the examination room. I stayed in the corridor, clutching her bag. The copper moon jingled again whenever I breathed.
It was noon when Robert called me.
“Where are you?” he asked in an irritated voice.
“At the hospital. They’re examining Maya.”
“Emily, seriously? You took her from school without telling me anything?”
“Because to you, all of this is always made up.”
“Watch how you speak.”
“The doctor said her condition needs to be examined.”
“A doctor again? You’re spending money before we even know the results.”
At that moment, for the first time, I was no longer afraid of his displeasure.
“If money is more important than our child, then that is your problem now.”
I ended the call.
A few minutes later, the doctor’s office door opened. Levan came out holding papers. His face had changed. The severity that had been in his eyes before was gone. Now something heavier was there.
“Mrs. Thorne, you need to sit down,” he told me.
“What happened?”
He looked at Maya, then at me. In the office, the nurse put her pen on the table. The room became strangely quiet.
“The blood test contains indicators that require me to ask you several additional questions. First of all, what type of heating do you have in your home?”
I was about to answer when Robert appeared at the end of the corridor. Anger was written on his face, and in his hand he held the keys to our house.
The doctor looked at him and suddenly stopped.
“Are you her father?”
“Yes. What is happening?”
Levan put the papers on the table and quietly said to the nurse:
“Lock the door and call the toxicology team.”
The keys fell from Robert’s hand onto the floor. The doctor turned toward me and reached for the brown folder lying in the corner of the office…
Levan’s hand was extended toward the folder when Robert stepped forward.
“Why do you need the toxicology team?” he asked.
The nurse locked the door. The small sound of the lock seemed louder to me than Robert’s voice.
“We need to verify the results first,” the doctor said. “Maya’s blood shows signs of carbon monoxide exposure.”
“That’s impossible,” Robert replied immediately.
“It is not impossible. It is simply possible that the source is in your home.”
Maya tried to sit up on the bed, but she became dizzy. I slipped my hand around her shoulders.
“Easy, sweetheart.”
“Mom, I told you that I always feel bad in the morning.”
Robert looked at her, but he no longer said anything.
The nurse put an oxygen mask over Maya’s face. The plastic edge touched her cheek, and her hair stuck to her forehead with sweat. I watched her and realized how many times I had told her, “Just wait a little longer, Dad will understand soon.” That thought cut me from the inside.
“Do you have a gas heater at home?” Levan asked again.
“It’s an old boiler,” Robert said. “We inspect it every year.”
“When was it inspected last?”
Robert looked away.
“A few months ago.”
“Who inspected it?”
“A repairman.”
“Do you remember his name?”
Robert fell silent.
Levan picked up his phone.
“I will contact the fire service. No one should enter the house until its safety is confirmed.”
“This is excessive,” Robert said irritably. “The child may simply have a virus.”
“The child has shown signs of low-level oxygen exposure for several weeks,” the doctor said sternly. “Now is not the time to argue.”
At three o’clock Maya’s condition had relatively stabilized. I sat beside her bed and kissed her fingers. Robert stood by the window. The house keys were no longer visible in his pocket.
“Robert, did you really inspect the heater?” I asked.
“I answered you.”
“No, you didn’t answer me.”
He turned toward me.
“Do you want to blame me now?”
“I want to know why our child gets sick every morning.”
“Because you turn everything into a tragedy.”
Maya opened her eyes.
“Dad, I wasn’t making it up.”
For the first time, I saw not anger but fear on Robert’s face.
“Don’t start this now,” he said.
“It just hurt,” Maya answered quietly.
Those four words stripped our entire home bare.
At six in the evening, two specialists arrived. They wore protective masks and held measuring devices. Robert stood in front of them in the hospital corridor.
“You cannot enter the house,” one of them told him.
“It is my house.”
“That is exactly why I am telling you. The reading is much higher than normal.”
I stood up from the chair.
“How high?”
The specialist looked at me.
“High enough that even spending several hours there is dangerous.”
My knees gave way. Robert put his hand against the wall.
“But we have lived there for months,” I said.
“Your daughter spent the most time in the house. Especially in the morning, when the heating was operating.”
I returned to Maya’s bed and looked at her bag. The copper moon shone silently beneath the flash.
“We have an alarm device,” Robert said. “It is in the kitchen.”
The specialist shook his head.
“We found only an empty casing there. The battery had been removed.”
Silence fell over the room.
“Who removed it?” I asked.
Robert fixed his eyes on me.
“It probably ran out by itself.”
“Then why didn’t you replace it?”
“I don’t know, Emily. Because now you are looking for guilt in everything, just like you always do.”
I clasped Maya’s hand. She was still breathing weakly.
The next morning I met the hospital social worker. She told me that returning home was forbidden until the boiler was repaired and the air inspection was completed.
“Move to a hotel temporarily,” she advised.
Robert interrupted her immediately.
“We don’t have money for that.”
I turned toward him.
“Our child is in danger.”
“The doctors said she is already better.”
“So we should return her to the same house?”
“You turn everything into drama.”
The social worker coughed awkwardly.
“Mrs. Thorne, there is something you should know. During the examination, Maya said that the alarm device at home had not worked for a long time.”
Robert’s face went pale.
“How does she know that?” he asked.
Maya’s phone lay beside the bed. The screen suddenly lit up. It was a message from an unknown number: “If you don’t tell Emily everything, I will.”
Robert reached toward the phone.
I grabbed it before he could.
“Who is writing to you?” I asked.
He stopped.
That night, while Maya slept, I found one saved audio recording on her phone. Only a date was written in the title. I pressed play and heard Robert’s voice.
“If you tell your mother this, the family will fall apart. So think carefully now about what you are going to do…”
The recording ended there.
The recording ended there, but Robert’s voice remained in the room for a long time.
At two in the morning, beside Maya, I held the phone in my hand and felt my back growing cold.
I called Robert.
“Where are you?”
“Downstairs, in the waiting area.”
“Come up immediately.”
He came in a few minutes later. He held a paper cup, but he had not drunk the coffee.
“When did you make this recording?” I asked.
He looked at the phone screen.
“You are not allowed to listen to Maya’s personal belongings.”
“You threatened her.”
“I did not threaten her. I told her not to spread panic.”
“Why shouldn’t her mother know that the alarm device was turned off?”
Robert clenched his jaw.
“Because the device was broken and a new one was expensive.”
“That was the reason?”
“We were supposed to call a repairman. Then I had problems at work. Then other expenses piled up.”
“How long had it been turned off?”
He did not answer.
Levan appeared at the door. Behind him stood a police officer and a fire-service specialist.
“The results have arrived,” the doctor said. “Maya’s repeat analysis shows that the exposure was not a single incident. It continued for a long time.”
My heart seemed to fall onto the floor.
“So it could have killed her?”
“In a severe case, yes. Especially during sleep.”
Maya opened her eyes. She had heard everything.
“Dad knew,” she said.
Robert quickly shook his head.
“No, I didn’t know how dangerous it was.”
“You knew the alarm was beeping,” Maya said. “You removed the battery.”
Robert walked to her bed.
“That night the sound was only bothering me. I had to go to work in the morning.”
“Then why didn’t you buy a new one?”
“I had no money.”
I looked at him.
“But last week you bought a new television.”
He hid his gaze.
The specialist opened the folder. Inside were a house inspection report, several photographs, and a letter from the service company.
“According to this document, the boiler’s exhaust pipe was damaged as early as November,” he said. “You received a warning and signed for receiving it.”
Robert immediately exclaimed:
“I did not sign anything.”
The specialist put the paper in front of him.
“This is your signature.”
I looked at the signature. It was truly his. Below it was written: “Repair postponed at the owner’s request.”
I could hear the sound of blood in my ears.
“Why did you postpone it?” I asked.
“Because my salary was reduced that month.”
“And why didn’t you tell me?”
“Because I knew you would want to pay for everything anyway.”
“This was our child’s life, Robert.”
“I didn’t know this would happen!”
“But you knew there was danger.”
He fell silent.
Levan said calmly:
“The important thing now is that Maya is stable. But child protective services and the police will examine this report.”
Robert knocked the chair aside.
“The police? A technical problem in my own house is not a crime.”
The police officer spoke for the first time.
“When a warning has been received, an alarm device has been deliberately turned off, and a minor has been in danger for weeks, we cannot simply call it a technical problem.”
Tears ran from Maya’s eyes.
“I thought that if I cried louder, he would believe me.”
I kissed her hand.
“You were telling the truth from the beginning.”
At that very moment, I received a call on my phone. The number belonged to the service company that had inspected the boiler.
“Mrs. Thorne, I have one more thing to tell you,” the man said on the line. “Our archive contains a video recording from the day your husband received the warning. And it shows that he was not alone.”
“Who was he with?”
The man on the other end of the line breathed heavily.
“I cannot tell you over the phone. But in the video he says that soon no one will live in the house anymore, and therefore there is no point in making the repair.”
Robert saw my face.
“Emily, give me the phone.”
I took a step backward.
“Who did he mean, Robert?”
He could not answer.
The next morning, before Maya was taken to another examination in the clinic room, a new message arrived on my phone: “What your husband said is only the beginning. See whose name the second apartment was registered under…”
რობერტმა საკუთარი ხმა მოისმინა და პირველად დადუმდა…
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„მე არ გსჯი — უბრალოდ აღარ დაგიცავ შედეგებისგან.“
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